First Cut Evaluation

I believe that we used some good camera angles as they displayed what was going on in the scene well. The first shot shows the teenagers and the dark environment suggest that theres something wrong or mysterious about the park. The shot of the clown is good as it conceals the identity of the clown and leaves the audience waiting to see the face of the killer adding tension to the opening. However the timing of when the shot was taken was too late which caused the scene to look dark and difficult to see. We stuck to the script well and kept to the shot types and story that we wanted to achieve. We edited the scene to make it lighter, however this affected the quality of the footage and made it a poorer quality. Because of make-up, etc it took up time which limited the time we had to film. So a good idea would be to do the make-up before going out to film so we have more daylight hours to film and get more footage. We also need to add background scene to make our final product more effective and to put the audience on edge.